Redaction the sequel (Part II)

So here it is the first of the month and as promised here is the update on the proposed sequels. Although I’m not currently working on the book, it is there in the back of my mind and is effecting my current novel. Let’s just say nuclear meltdown and vengence isn’t exactly the best mindset to write a romantic comedy. Want a little nuclear fall out with your Valentine’s Day chocolate?

Yeah, me neither.

But there it is. The universe is gearing up to give me the two stories–the one on the trail and the second in the mines all at once so I’m hoping to release both this year and the 100 years in the future sequel next year.

So what is in stock? I’ve finally settled in my mind what justice will be served up to Trent. Friends and other folks have kindly offered their (cruel and unusual) suggestions–including a few that I don’t think are even possible with the current laws of physics. So I’ve share my idea with a select few and was met with a stunned silence for all of a minute before there were wide grins and evil happiness all around. Am I going to share what it is? No, but it relates to every scene Trent was in so hopefully you’ll all give into your dark side and enjoy it when you read it.

And speaking of scenes, I will be going back to the first book and expanding the last few scenes including inserting more. It will start with Manny, Papa Rose and Dodger burying the bodies, then there will be the escaping the rats scene plus a few more before the bugging out. The book will end  with the same last scene with the air raid siren but there’ll be an extra 10-25K words added. After I fix the saluting issues and a few bug a boos (a different copy editor), it will be rereleased on amazon and barnes and noble so everyone who bought a copy should be able to download the new version without actually buying it. You’ll know it’s the new version because I’ll add part I, an uncivilized ending to the listing and I’ll post it here.

Book two still doesn’t have a title but these are the things I’m researching for it–Chernobyl, Hiroshima, Nagasaki, Fukisima, Three Mile Island plus I’ll be contacting the Union of Concerned Scientists about the full scale meltdowns, what it actually means and how will it effect life on the surface. I’ll also be looking into the new nuclear facilities China is building but that was deemed too risky for the US.

And speaking of heroes, there will be those who will attempt to place the reaction rods  in cool down and move them to storage, buying time for everyone to get to safety. I have to find out if a submariner would have the skill set to do this? Or I might have some Brits, Germans and  French fly in to tie in the global impact. And I’ll need time because you didn’t think  the evacuation would be easy, did you?

I also found a really cool Spike TV program on Netflix called Coal, which I’ll be watching for book three (tentatively titled Dark Genesis). But I’m getting a bit ahead of myself. I have to get they survivors out. The washes, while great for leaving the city present an problems and the road will be clogged with traffic. Fortunately, I live in the Wild West and there are some outlaw trails that have been preserved running down Old Mexico way on up to  Canada. Then there’s the Continental Divide Trail that does the same thing but is a bit too far east for my purposes. If I cover Miles’s journey he would use the Appalachian Trail. Middle Americans would be best to use Ol’ Mississippi and take the rivers as far west as you can to mining territory.

Of course the issue with these are the lack of vehicles, slowing down the process. Add in a bunch of sick people and there are some very hard decisions that will need to be made. And I haven’t even hit upon the distemper running rampant in the West, or the actual plague and hanta virus endemic to the areas they must cross.

The body count will continue to rise. But I’ve been threatened with bodily harm if some die–you do remember that Sunnie, Mavis and David were all exposed to the anthrax, right? And there’s no evidence that having the vaccine will prevent them from dying. And then there’s Wheelchair Henry, Blind Connie, and the wheezing old man Quartermain.

As for a title, I’ll still looking around. I do like the dying time. It was used by Europenan colonists most of whom died soon after landing in the New World. Maybe I’ll host a contest and the winner gets to read the next book before it is release.

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Cutting the Mustard

There are phrases in the English language that make me wonder what a person was on when they first spoke the words. It also makes me wonder what the rest of us were on to continue to  use them. Such a phrase is the anuyerism inspiring ‘Cut the Mustard.”

By catsup, what does it mean?

Apparently it means to do satisfactorily, to perform a job well. Well, gee that’s easy to understand just by looking at it. NOT!

Since I am on vacation today, I decided to look up where the phrase comes from. Hmm, no one else seems to know and there are those who have a newspaper dating nearly a decade before O Henry’s use that reference it, meaning it was in use before either were used.

So, as a breakdown, mustard being a spicy condiment had to be cut with vinegar to reduce the bitterness. Early on, have mustard (not in your fridge as those weren’t invented yet) meant you were energenic. So I guess all those hyperactive people being asked to tone it down to a normal level?

Don’t think about it too much as your head might explode.

The other reference is an adulteration of ‘cut the muster’ as in dodging the mustering up of your unit/platoon/band of soldiers. Given the current nature of the sayings interpretation, this wouldn’t be either satisfactory or honorable unless you were a pacificist. So this doesn’t seem likely either

Others have made reference to the fact that cutting mustard at the table is easier than cutting butter. And I can’t for life of me figure out how this matters, unless Bob was laughing at a  dinner guest who was so drunk he couldn’t cut the mustard.

So for the sake of my sanity, I’m not going to think about what it means and how it came into being.

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The Universe and I

I love the moon. It is a weird attachment, so don’t be thinking I have were tendencies. It is simply that I take comfort when it is out at the same time that I am. Lately, the inconstant moon has taken to crossing the sky while I’m stuck indoors. It is most vexing.

But, there are still the twinkling stars, satellites and occasionally the space station arcs overhead. Yes, I’m heading off to work and walking the dog when it is dark outside. I’ve heard it said that some folks look up at the stars and feel small and alone.

I gaze up at them and fell connected.

Perhaps, I took Carl Sagan’s words about being children of star dust serious, but seeing the stars and planets makes feel feel a part of something, bigger and long lasting.

Alas, I’ve had a rather crappy last couple of days and I did let loose on the universe, railing at it for what had happened. After venting with a few sympathetic friends, I got in my car to drive home.  When I turned the corner, there on the western horizon was the tiniest crescent of a moon, turned upright in a big smiley-face grin.

The universe was telling me that things would get better.

But the next morning was yet another unexpected thing to deal with. And I silently fumed all the way to work. Now, I’ve often told the universe and the powers that be that if they want to get a message across, they needed to take out a billboard because hints and subtlety are sometimes lost on me. So, low and behold, I opened up twitter and there was a message linking me to a blog pertaining directly to three of my problems.

Coincidence?

I thought so until, I opened my email and there were the words in the subject line pertaining to the morning’s irritants. Message received. I let go of the anger and grief. Low and behold, throughout the day, many of the problems worked themselves out and sharing memories with family is a great way to keep a loved one alive and dull the pain of their passing.

Until Monday, I hope the universe continues to shine upon you and, shameless plug ahead, I’m on Bella’s blog today being grilled by the heroine of Blue Maneuver.

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10,000 steps

When my parents were over the other day passing off their cold, my dad mentioned a little factoid that stuck with me and will hopefully be around long after the flu bug scrams. He said that you need to take an average of 10,000 steps per day to be healthy. Then he looked at his pedometer, clicked a few buttons and said he’d walked enough to have his glass of wine.

So since I like being healthy, I thought I’d give it a try and see how much I walk . Between the housework and errands I far exceeded the 10K steps.   But when I got to work the cheapo little pedometer kept falling off and resetting. Including on the bathroom floor, ew! Thank heavens for Chlorox wipes! So instead of dinking around some more with it, I just bought a cheapo new one with a better clip. Walking the dog puts me at 4K. Work yesterday added another 2K?

2K really. At that rate, I wouldn’t even need a slice of cheese and a cracker to power me through the day. So when I arrived home, it was another walk in the park for me sans the dog, because he has issues. Which put me over the top by 100 steps and allowed me to eat one Christmas cookie from my secret stash in the freezer. My son polished off my pumpkin spice ice cream from Fresh and Easy, which tastes like pumpkin pie and whipped cream. He said he knew which was why he ate it.

So I’ll be experimenting over the next couple of days to see if I can increase my numbers at work. Because the dog sighed, pouted and turned his back to me for the rest of the night after sniffing my shoes and figuring out I had gone to the park without him.

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SHAPE SHIFTERS IN NATIVE AMERICAN LORE by Vijaya Schartz

COYOTE GORGEOUS is a 99 cents romantic novella exploring the world of Hopi traditions and the clash of Hopi culture with that of the White Man. Set in

Arizona, where I live, it mixes the scientific approach to wild life, with a smart, and down to earth heroine (a ranger in uniform carrying a gun) and the less known legends of skinwalkers and the Chupacabra, and the relationship of the Native American tribes with what they call the Star People.

In Arizona, the caves abound with ancient drawings of such Star visitors, and no matter how pragmatic, one has to wonder… Who was the Great Coyote?

What I found in my research was fascinating.

I always wanted to write a Native American hero, and this request from a publisher gave me a chance to write Kaletaka (Kal for short). Of course, he is gorgeous and captivating… He also keeps a wild bob cat as a pet, and he can cook. I thoroughly enjoyed writing this novella, which is not only a romance, but full of action, and a bit of a mystery.

Here is what the story is about:

Arizona Game Ranger Madison Huntley, investigating a wild animal attack on a ranch in Cave Creek, discovers disturbing details. If she didn’t know better, she’d say the legends frightening the ranch hand might be true. But Madison isn’t just a wilderness cop. As a biologist and a wild life expert, she believes in facts and science, not scary tales.

And when Kaletaka, a Hopi sculptor, awakens bloody, with no recollection of what he did the night before, he remembers the legends of his tribe, and the meaning of his name. But as hard as he tries, can he escape his destiny?

REVIEWS:

“Phenomenal world building, characters the readers care about, and an intriguing mystery… COYOTE GORGEOUS has all the elements one expects from a Vijaya Schartz story! Easily recommended!” – 4.5 shamrocks – Debbie CK2sKwipsandKritique

“So many times my theory of who done it was thwarted and yet I was thrilled to stay on the edge of my seat until the very last word just to find out.” Five stars – Book Junkie Reviews

“…excellent characters… well written. Fascinated about the subject matter and the legends…” Five hearts – Romance Book Scene

Vijaya Schartz

Blasters, Guns, Swords, Romance with a kick

http://www.vijayaschartz.com

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Interview with Mimi Barbour

Happy Saturday Everyone!

Today it is my honor to have Mimi Barbour with me and she’s willing to give away an ebook copy of her book to one person who comments. Here’s a little bit about Mimi: MIMI BARBOUR – Author of THE VICARAGE BENCH SERIES lives in Qualicum Beach and writes her paranormal romances with tongue in cheek and a mad glint in her eye. If I can steal a booklover’s attention away from their every-day grind, absorb them into a fantasy love story, and make them care about the ending, then I’ve done my job.”

The 4th in the series “Together Again” was released May

What prompted you to write that first book? Did you always want to be an author?

I decided to write the first book after having purchased a romance that was poorly written, uninteresting and big waste of money. Childishly, I threw it across the room and sat fuming with thoughts like – I could write better trash than this! So I did.

I never knew I wanted to be an author until after I started writing that first book. I soon realized that I walked around with a smile on my face most days, plots rumbling around in my now active little head and a need to rush out of bed in the morning. It was a lovely feeling – one I still have to this day.
How do you decide which book?

The decision was made for me when I joined a contest with The Wild Rose Press where their guidelines required a paranormal romance about a girl passing through a garden gate and going back in time to a different era. Once I’d sent in my entry, I was informed that since I hadn’t followed their rules, I couldn’t be a part of the contest – but – they had liked my work and wanted to publish me as a stand-alone author. I can’t repeat what I said after reading the e-mail as its bleep stuff but believe me, every word shouted was a result of pure happiness.
Can you tell us a little bit about your latest release, Together for Christmas?

Awww….my favourite book to date! I’ve never enjoyed writing a book so much or had it flow so smoothly. The words seemed to fill my mind in such a way that I had trouble typing fast enough. It was a lovely experience.

This story is pure Christmas, sentimental and sweet, and the characters so much fun that hopefully they will make you smile and in places, laugh out loud.

Abbie, my heroine works for the village vicar and is an angel to the people in town, always there, always willing to give.

Marcus, on the other hand, is a grumpy businessman who begrudges time spent away from his office.

Right at the beginning when Abbie invades his body and their spirits are forced to live together, fireworks fly and love seeps in.

Add to the story the little children from the orphanage, Marcus’s amusing mother and the antics of the townspeople and you have a fun, lighted-hearted, sweet romance.

Many of your books contain paranormal elements. Have you ever had a paranormal experience?

I wish! Imagine time-travelling to another era? With my luck I’d end up as a poor person, starving and ugly – or if I had the unfortunate experience of invading someone else’s body, they’d probably be a psycho killer? Thankfully, as the creator, I can choose the best scenarios for my characters. But – this has given me an idea. If I ever decide to change from sweet stories to horror, I could whip up all kinds of conflicts, couldn’t I? Hummm??? Oh but then I’d never sleep at night so best to stick with what I know and like.

Do you plot your stories out or do you just start writing?

Funny you should ask. At the last RWA meeting I attended, someone else asked me the same question and I had to think of how to answer. Seems I do plot out my story inasmuch as I’ve thought it all out in my head and pretty well know how the story line will move along. I have a good idea of who my characters are by then also. Therefore, all I do is write a quick bio for each of them and work very hard on that first page and the first chapter. It’s probably the area in my books that I rewrite the most, because to me, it seems the most important.
What was the funniest thing you learned about your hero/heroine from writing their story?

Abbie had more grit in her that she ever imagined and could stand up for her rights when it came to the crunch.

Marcus had never realized that his gruffness was pure sham and his insides were pure marshmallow, but once his love for Abbie had consumed him, well – what could a fellow do?
Which of your characters is most like you and which is least like you?

I’m a softy – an easy-going person who likes to laugh. Most days I wake up with a smile on my face. And, I like people. My husband thinks I’m nuts because I like everyone until they do something that makes me think differently. He says I’m backwards.

I guess I have to confess that I had a lot of fun writing Abbie because I understood her so well. Gotta admit though, I am a bit like Marcus also. Since I’ve become a writer, I do appreciate his need to work all the time.

But I must mention Mrs. Dorn who is my all-time favourite character. I think she’s a hoot, and I work very hard to keep her visible in every one of the Vicarage Bench books.
Can you describe your office or where you normally write?

I have a lovely office, not too large but with a nice big window. My desk is usually full of notes and papers and how-to books that fight for space with the thesaurus and dictionary. My one problem is my office chair. I’ve recently found that pain gathers behind my right knee and I complained to my guy who checked it out, and – in his typical droll voice – mentioned that the padding had been worn down and that maybe the extra weight I’ve carried since Christmas might be the problem.

I hit him!!!

Then I begged for him to re-pad the seat, which he’s doing right now.

Which came first the plot or the characters?

Always the plot or at least the idea of a plot! Once I’ve come up with clues as to what I want the story to be about, I decide what kind of people will best work in those guidelines. I guess my hardest decision is naming these people. I once mentioned to my mom that I had difficulty with this chore and for months she sent me envelopes in the mail filled with lists of names. Ya just gotta love a mom like that!
Have you ever gotten stuck while writing a scene or chapter? How did you overcome it?

I very seldom get stuck because I’ve always imagined each conflict before I write it. But, having said this, I must admit that many times while I write these scenes things begin to change and I find myself with a whole new plot twist that usually works into the story really well. It’s exciting when that happens, and after so many books, I’ve come to rely on it and even look forward to it.

What is the wackiest thing that’s ever happened to you since you started writing?

Promotion! It makes me wacky. I mean, all I want to do is write. Like most authors, I’m happiest buried in the book with my characters. But nowadays, to be successful, we need to be both a writer and be able to promote that work in order for someone to know the book even exists. Because I’m a bit compulsive and can’t do anything half-assed, I joined up on every site I could find. Between Facebook, Twitter, Goodreads, LinkedIn, All Romance, and on and on, I had spread myself so thin, I spent the bulk of my time running around the internet like a crazy person. And other than spreading my name around so people will hopefully recognize my books, I don’t think it really did much good. I just jostled around with all the others doing the same thing and got lost. This last six months, I’ve made a concerted effort to slow down and get choosy where I fritter my time. In September, I started my own blog called Believe and I love spending time there and with my twitter friends.

Did you do any research for your book and, if so, did you find any
interesting information that you had to include in the story?

With each of the books I’ve had to do a certain amount of research, but what I’ve come to accept is that the villageof Buryin my head is nothing like the actual Bury near Manchester. And that’s just fine because there is such a thing as taking literary licence; authors do it all the time. Thank goodness!
Where can readers find out more about you?

Come visit me on my blog at – http://mimibarbour.blogspot.com

Or my website – http://www.mimibarbour.com

Follow me on twitter – @MimiBarbour

Or on any of the many sites I mentioned above. I’m always happy to meet new friends.

Here’s the blurb for her book:

Abbie Taylor has a thousand things to do before the big day, help the vicar with his needy families, organize the Christmas nativity, and spare time for a distraught baby at the orphanage who only settles when she’s near. Falling into a coma while her spirit resides inside a prickly, big shot businessman doesn’t work for her at all …until she falls in love.

How could Marcus Chapman be so unlucky? First he’s saddled with his newly widowed mum, and the next thing he knows, he has an annoying spirit invader who’s instantly aware that he isn’t nearly as tough as he makes out. Between these two manipulating women, and the orphans Abbie forces him to visit, the poor man doesn’t stand a chance. The season is Christmas, and love is all around

And  here’s a sneak peak:

Maybe it was the eagerness in her voice, or maybe just her words, but whatever she said made him smile. Up till then, he’d seemed like a stranger looking back at her. Then his smile changed everything. Unfortunately, it didn’t last too long. But she’d seen enough and decided right away that he had a dear face. Not what one would call handsome, more like interesting. She’d bet that his full head of messy hair cut short and worn close to his head normally didn’t look so scruffy. That wouldn’t be his style at all.

His piercing green eyes didn’t have the same sparkle as his mother’s. They were ruthless and compelling, slightly haughty and intense, and the shrewdest stare she’d ever come across. She felt as if he were trying to find her inside of him by staring into his own eyes.

“Can you see me?” She teased.

     “I do believe I can. I went slightly crossed-eyed for a moment, and I have no doubt that was you sneaking a peek.”  When he grinned, dimples appeared on both sides of his mouth and created a whole different impression. This man devastated with his attractiveness, his charisma.

Unequivocally, Abbie knew at that moment, not only had her spirit joined with his, but also her heart now faced a challenge. She’d never believed in love at first sight, more fool her. She shut down her corridor to him and curled up into a small ball lodged inside his body. This needed a great deal of thought. She had to talk herself out of this nonsense, and quickly.

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Blue Maneuver-the blog tour

Hi everyone,
I’ll be one tour the next couple of months promoting my urban SciFi novel, Blue Maneuver.
Here are the stops so far (Some dates may change because I have spontaneous moments of stupidity):

January 25th–KE Saxon’s blog–Interview with Rae

January 27th–Bella Street’s Blog–Rae interviews me and threatens me with a lobotomy (she talks a lot!)

January 30th–Vijaya Schartz’s Blog–The price of technology

February 1st–Over at Bandit Creek Books–Interview with Rae

February 3rd–Cynthia Woolf’s blog–I’m interviewed (no lobotomy threats)

February 6th–On Sapphire Phelan’s blog–I Swear it! (swearing in fiction)

February 8th–Lynda Hilburn’s blog–Can science explain the paranormal?

February 10th–Tracy Sumner’s blog–Rae and her two new love interests

February 15th-Maldivian book reviewer

February 20th-Lynda K Scott’s blog

February 24th-Much Cheaper Than Therapy blog

February 27th–Blogging with PR Mason at Confucius Cat

February 29th–Mother Gamer Writer

March 5th–Blogging with Franjessca Papillion, the book worm

March 21st–Seeing Night Blog

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Scrapbooking and writing

One of the things on by To-Do list is scrapbooking the year 2010. I think there’s something like 200 pictures in all. So last night, I spent a half an hour searching for the little buggers. Finally, I found them then began the fun of sorting-birthdays, weddings, trips, what the heck was this? Is that a person?

I apparently have pack-rat tendencies. It was very hard for me to toss some photos. I only convinced myself to do so because the image was blurry and I don’t remember why I took it.

Such a marvelous memory I have.

Any who, as I’m going through the pictures–not actually scrapbooking, just doing the prep work–I realized I scrapbook my novels (Except their better documented). No only do I have pictures of what they look like, as well as journaling about their habits, age, etc, but I also have images from their hobbies, clothes, homes, and the areas they travel in. All of which are cut out and pasted into a notebook.

I take that notebook with me anywhere I go that I might have time to write.

But if it should fall into the wrong hands, what will they think of the comments: who should die next? Sex? Y/N? How could I possibly make this worse?

Surely, if such a thing would fall into the hands of a mental health practitioner, I would be committed.

Then again, maybe not.

Creative people like writers and artists are allowed sanity leeway.

As for my scrapbooks… I never claimed to be normal.

Fortunately, I fit right in with my family:-)

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The Mythical Day Off

A day off? Really. I’m sure many off you look forward to having that extra, magical 24 hours off. I know I do, yet it really isn’t time off. I clean the house, shop and catch up on chores around the house. And then ‘poof’ it’s gone and I’m rolling out of bed to take the dog for a walk before heading off to work.

So were does that extra time go today?

Frankly, I slept most of it away. I like to sleep. I imagine if there was a theme park created around mattresses and other comfy places to sleep I’d visit it. I’ve always wanted to try sleeping in a hammock.

But as the clock ticks toward wake-up and go to work hour, I am looking back on my weekend to see what exactly I’ve accomplished. I’ve answered lots of emails, sent out lots of review requests and tried to arrange a mini-blog tour for Blue Maneuver. I’ve celebrated my son’s 20th birthday and finished the quilt top for my oldest daughter. I’ve even managed to scrapbook 3 pages.

I’ve also scrubbed the floor and cleaned up after hurricane Jesse and her two day adventure of baking a 15 lb cake/pie thing. Then because I rise when it is dark out and don’t turn on the lights so as not to wake up the morning zombies, I managed to step in cat pooh and track it through the house and across all my recently cleaned floors.

Which then had to be recleaned.

Now, I’m writing my overdue blog after cutting my husband’s hair in exchange for him checking the oil level in my truck. The actual checking part would have been shorter, but the man can’t sit still and he keeps staring at me like we’re supposed to be doing something together. We did go for a walk and he helped make a new recipe for dinner.

After he heads out, there are more emails and such in my future and several more blogs to write for the upcoming mini-tour, plus emailing blog touring companies to arrange one on my behalf–if they take urban scifi books.

And tonight, while I’m scrapbooking a few more pages, I’m going to watch the Frontline investigation into nuclear power plants. That is if I can stay up that late. No where in there have I worked on my Valentine’s day book due in March. Somehow I write more productively when I’m working. Go figure.

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Sweet Blog Award

I just received my first blog award, so I’m spreading the love.
Thanks KE Saxon for nominating me! Check out her fabulous blog. And if you’re in the mood for a fairy tale romance with a twist of naughty, I’d recommend you pick up her book: Diamonds and Toads.Here are the rules if you want to participate:
1. Thank and link to the person who nominated you.
2. Share 7 random facts about yourself.
3. Pass the award along to 10 deserving blog buddies.
4. Contact those buddies to congratulate them.
So here are the Seven random facts about yours truly:
1.) I have several plans to destroy the world, but Redaction was the first time I ever wrote about one plan.
2.) I love deadly disaster movies although I’m not keen actually experiencing one.
3.) One of my earliest memories is of pulling off the side of the road in Oklahoma because of tornado warnings. I was four and we were moving to Arizona.
4.) I remember playing the deadly disease alphabet when I worked as a microbiologist for a pharmaceutical company.
5.) I never wanted to be a writer. Writing is hard! Now I do it to keep my brain flexible.
6.) I love learning.
7.) I do logic puzzles for fun!
Here are the blogs that I nominated:
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