Behind Intelligent Design

Like many authors, I find facets of my personality, life experiences, and education reflected in each of my stories. The romantic elements come from an optimistic belief that ultimately good triumphs over evil, the suspense subplots show how justice is eventually served, and the heroine’s journey showcases how although she may be forced into a situation by outside forces (story plot), it is the choices she makes that decide her fate and, hopefully, her victory.
As dark as Intelligent Design is, all those elements are present. Yet, the story itself reflects a huge departure from my normal style. First, it was the first time I allowed my scientific nature to dominate any story. I have a BS in Biology, and I used the theories gleaned from classes required for my degree. For example, each of my aliens are based on creatures found on Earth (Zoology) and the idea that viruses play a key role in human/animal evolution and development came from both Microbiology and Evolutionary Biology.
The title and main idea of Intelligent Design is based on the theory of the same name–out there somewhere, an intelligent entity is guiding the development of life on this planet. This theory is a merging of Darwin’s theory of Evolution and Creationism. I was familiar with the ID theory but had never looked at it in depth until I worked as a Physical Science Laboratory Co-ordinator for a Christian university. Several of our students refused to take science and learn that ‘evolutionary blasphemy from a bunch of atheists.’ As every science faculty member signed a written statement testifying for their individual faith, this prompted me to investigate the various alternative theories in depth. For the record, I do not believe in the theory of Intelligent Design, but my faith in God and Evolution happily co-exist inside my head as they always have.
However, the idea of an intelligent being guiding human evolution took root, and a story idea was born.
But an idea doesn’t always end up with words on paper. Several years later, a confluence of events sparked such an outrage inside me that writing provided the only outlet to deal with the anger.
I chose a boardroom setting because at the time American businesses were asking from the US government for a financial bail-out, while their executives received multi-million dollar bonuses, all the while their respective companies were exporting jobs overseas to increase their profits–ie distancing themselves from the consumer and not really bothering with the details as long as their desires are catered to.
I turned humanity into a commodity as a result of my disgust with how callously life is extinguished around the globe and, also, to reflect the growing litigious nature of our society–how much is a human life worth in dollars and cents (again echoing the bottom-line scenario worshipped in business).
The element of Intelligent Design that surprised me the most was the graphic violence depicting the relationships between power, violence and sex. It still makes me squeamish to think about those scenes, but they were necessary to reflect the attitudes toward women and the fact that males feel they have a say about a woman’s body, but never vice-versa.
And lastly, the ending of the story pays homage to my reading/writing roots as well as my personal belief system–eventually wrongs will be put to right, a single life sacrificed on the altar of violence can do more good than a hundred years wasted in self-centered hedonism, and that humanity’s purpose may be encoded in our DNA–which just might explain the cooperative and alturistic behaviors most people exhibit during natural disasters.

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What’s in a Name? Part II

Keeping to my theme from Monday’s post, today is about character names. Once I started writing a book with Jonathon as my hero’s name. This was an historical and the name fit the time period and his character.
But it didn’t quite do it for the story.
About 100 pages in, I came to a scene where two thugs were harrassing the hero. Jonathon wanted to talk his way out of the situation. Now I like smart heroes but this seemed a little ridiculous and, frankly, not what I wanted him to do.
Then I changed his name from Jonathon to Everett.
And what did Everett do? He punched took on the two thugs and gave them a much needed whooping.
Problem solved.
So if you’re struggling with your characters, maybe your problem is in the name. Here are a few links to look up your names to make sure they mean what you want.

http://www.behindthename.com/

http://www.name-meanings.com/

http://www.meaning-of-names.com/

http://babynamesworld.parentsconnect.com/

Oh, and one more place you might want to look is in the obits.

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What’s In A Name? Part I

Like most weekends, my husband and I relax by watching movies. Friday, we had received our first disk of The Walking Dead. We managed to watch all three episodes and enjoyed the series very much. But afterwards, we both looked at each other and said, the main character (sheriff’s deputy) never asked what had happened to anyone? He didn’t ask it when he was initially rescued by the guy and his son. He didn’t ask it when he rejoined his wife and kid. It would have been nice to have some explanation or if the writers didn’t want to give one, then say one minute the government said this, the next it was over. Anything would be better than nothing. It would have helped us to know how long the guy had been out in the hospital, and I won’t even ask why he wasn’t eaten because they made an excellent point that the Walkers could smell them, yet he was left alone in a hospital bed with nothing but a gurney to protect him. At least in 28 Days Later, they had locked the hero inside his room. Point two–why had the group made no effort to relocate to a secure position or, after the first Walker arrived, put defenses around their camp. What kind of sense does that make?
But we really did enjoy the first half of the series and look forward to the next disc.
The last movie we watched was Titanic II. Yeah, we were hoping it would either be a good movie or a great bad movie. It was somewhere in between. But it did get us thinking. We would never board a ship with the name Titanic any more than we’d sail away on a ship named Anchor. I’d love to take a Zeppelin ride but not in anything named Hindenburg. And I’d certainly buy a ticket (if I had the money) for a space flight but not if shuttled was named Columbia or Challenger.
I understand that accidents happen, but I’m not one for needlessly tempting fate. And I view accidents in a completely different light that those sunk by collisions or bombs. So, I would take a cruise on the USS Arizona and even the SS Minnow (on a three hour tour).
It may seem superstitious, but to me riding on a ship nature took down would be like boarding one named I Double Dog Dare You to Sink/Down Me.

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Sewing Adventures Part II–The Pattern

Once my daughter had decided on the style and fabric of her new dress, I had to show her how to cut out the pieces. Of course, since it had been a while since I’d actually cut anything other than quilting pieces, I had to refresh myself by reading the instructions. Fortunately, the how-to came flooding back so I passed them on to my daughter. She looked at them, looked at me, then looked at them again and said, “I thought you were going to teach me.”
“Yeah, I am but you should know what we’re doing before hand.”
“Oooookaaay.” Seven syllables. When we started, she handed them back to me.
I didn’t ask if she’d read them; I wasn’t in the mood to be lied to and it was enough that the papers hadn’t been shredded by her cat. So I showed her the pieces we needed from the pattern that we would have to cut out, how too measure the grain, what the shading meant and how to pin.
I also emphasized that you should layout as many of the pieces as possible before cutting a single one.
Those words would prove phrophetic as I eventually realized that the fabric she’d chosen for the practice dress had owls on it. You see the owls were perched on trees and if I had used the selvage they would be all lying on their sides instead of sitting on branches. Not exactly the look we were going for.
Being that she is a teenager and can’t control the flow of words out of her mouth, she said, “So what good are the instructions again, if we’re not going to follow them?”
Only seven more years until her whole head remodel is complete! But I digress.
You see, somewhere in my lecture of why close isn’t good enough in clothing sewing, I forgot about the diamonds. Once the pieces had been pinned, she’d began cutting everything out. Unfortunately the diamonds, she’d cut in toward the pattern piece.
Thank God for large seam allowances.

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Equipment Malfunction

My son is a big gamer, and he swears the X-Box cheats. As far as I know there isn’t an artificial intelligence inside the X-box, but I can sympathize with his technlogical frustration.
You see, I do most of my writing my pda. Now before you get the image of me pecking out words with my stylus while hunched over the small Smartphone sized screen, let me reassure you. I have a full-sized, folding wireless keyboard such as you would find on a 15.4 inch laptop.
But the problem is my keyboard. You see about a year after I bought the keyboard/pda system the keyboard casing cracked right where the wireless wand attaches. As the wires in the wireless wand didn’t seem to be broken, I kept using it and indeed encountered few problems.
Until lately.
Now when I open unfold the keyboard to begin working, the fun begins. First, the enter key doesn’t work. So while I can scroll through the files, I can’t actually open them unless I double tap the file. But if I do that, I find that most of the keys on the right side of the keyboard don’t work. Most come back after sliding the keyboard off and on for a while.
So then it will be only a few keys that no longer work. They are usually u,i,o, and p. Do you know how many words in the English langauge use those letters? After a while, the keys will start working within 10 taps. Then they’ll spit out double or triple the number of letters, just to mess with my head.
What fun!
But wait, it gets better. I can never get a capital i. In fact to get one, I have to open a previous file and copy one to paste later. Good times.
As you can imagine my productivity has been impaired and the fingertips of my right hand hurt. So Friday, I looked into buying a replacement keyboard. And decided that my money might be better spent buying a new system.

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Arizona Dreamin’ Recap

Last Saturday, I had the opportunity to participate in the first ever Arizona Dreamin’ Romance Reader event. Kris Tualla, Liz Munoz and many other ladies whose names I forgot to write down did a fabulous job of organizing the event from scratch. Tempe Innsuites provided excellent facilities for the event as well as an attentive staff and delicious food (including great brownies and monster m&m cookies).
I hosted a table and designed two small floral centerpieces in wine carafes, which I gave away. While we ate, a panel of writers talked and answered questions. One thing brought home to me was that there is no one way to write.
Each writer has their own process. Some plot their book extensively. The fabulous Denise Domning used to write 60 page synopses for her historicals. Kris Tualla writes an outline. Pam Tracy knows the beginning, a plot twist or two, and the ending. Patricia Potter begins with her characters. Cathy McDavid writes a paragraph of what needs to happen in a scene before she sits down to write it.
And that’s just a few of the panel members.
So if anyone ever tells you that you need to have X before you write word one, don’t listen.
A novel is a story that begins with a single word, whether that word falls in a character sketch, outline, synopsis or the book is up to you and your muse.

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Interview with Author Harold Ross Thompson

What prompted you to write that first book/short story?

I wrote my first novel length manuscript when I was fifteen. Ever since I’d learned to read, I’d been scribbling little books, stories, comic books and strips, so by the time I hit high school writing had just become a favourite pastime. So no one thing prompted me to write that first long book, unless I want to be really boring and say it was The Lord of the Rings. That’s not very original, but it’s true. I read Tolkien when I was eleven and quickly decided that I had to write a fantasy epic. After years of carting around a note book and a pen, I finally finished what I thought was a revolutionary concept, a fantasy novel set in a Napoleonic era world instead of an ancient or medieval one. It was awful, the first of five awful books I wrote in a row.

You’re published in historical fiction, what prompted you to write a story about the War on the Crimean Peninsula?

I’d learned a great deal of British Army history by working summers at the Halifax Citadel, a Victorian era fort in Canada (I eventually got a full time job there with Parks Canada). My interest in fantasy had gradually shifted to an interest in historical adventure, and I was reading a lot of C.S. Forester, Patrick O’Brian, Bernard Cornwell and the like. I was still determined to write a good novel, and thought that I probably knew enough history to switch gears, maybe even attempt a series covering the entire Victorian period. The Crimea seemed the best choice for a beginning because I wanted to start with something that was big. The Crimean War was the largest European war until WWI, and its story is full of iconic moments. It also represents a time of rapid technological advancement when the old ways of doing things existed side by side, for a time, with a host of newfangled contraptions. So in the Crimea you have Napoleonic era uniforms and tactics, but you also have massed rifles, trench warfare, rifled artillery, steamships, primitive ironclads, railways and telegraph lines.

Did you have to do a lot of research on the War? And, if so, would you share some of your favorite research books/sources?

I did a load of research that included both primary and secondary sources. I was already well versed in the mechanics of the British Army of the period, its structure, uniforms, equipment, drill, barracks life and so on, from my summer job, so was free to concentrate on the war itself for the most part. I wanted to find a way to create an authentic voice, a real-seeming person who could have existed and lived through those times. To do this I turned to the many memoirs and accounts of the “War with Russia” (as it was called at the time) that soldiers who served there wrote either at the time or years later. My starting point was Sergeant Timothy Gowing’s Voice from the Ranks, which is maybe the best known firsthand account of the Crimean War. Another was Thomas Faughnan’s Life of a British Soldier, which I still have on my book shelf. The third account that I remember was Sir Henry Clifford’s Letters and Sketches from the Crimea. There were others too, but I’ve since forgotten the names. No doubt they’re in a file somewhere.

During your research, did you find an interesting fact/situation that you just had to include in your book?

Many. I’d say that much of what happens to William Dudley in Dudley’s Fusiliers was stolen from real life. I took a philosophical recruiting sergeant from Thomas Faughnan’s account and imported him almost complete. Dudley’s promotion to sergeant on the field after the Battle of the Alma comes from Gowing. There are plenty more, but most of them are spoilers!

Can you tell us a little bit about your latest release?

My latest upcoming release is the sequel to Dudley’s Fusiliers, which is called Guns of Sevastopol. It has Dudley returning to the Crimea to see out the end of the siege of Sevastopol. There he runs afoul of the villainous Captain David Neville. A villainous officer may seem a bit cliché in a book like this, but they did exist and still do. Some of Neville’s villainy is based on historical anecdotes, some on situations I’ve encountered in my own life.

Do you plot your stories out or do you just start writing?

I always start with a complete outline, then break it into a chapter outline. I like to know who the characters are and how the book will begin and how it will end. With an historical this is a matter of choosing two points in time and then weaving the story around them. After I have a chapter outline I then just let the project simmer, jotting down ideas as they come to me. When I’ve built up enough of these ideas, I fill in the complete first draft, letting the characters walk through history, making decisions that I think that they would make.

Which of your characters is most like you and which is least like you?

None of my characters are really much like me. Some people have assumed that William Dudley is based on me, and he does share some of my ways of doing things, but he was designed to be a certain way, to be a naïve optimist who succeeds because he doesn’t understand the situation he’s in. I’m not like that, nor am I willing to stand up in the face of massed musket and rifle fire. So Dudley himself is both most and least like me.

Can you describe your office or where you normally write? Do you have anything in your office that helped inspire you to write the story?

I write from a home office. The current one is in my rec room and has a bathroom right behind it, which is important. I have a massive overstuffed book shelf behind me, and I take inspiration from that, but my biggest source of inspiration has always been music. I like to write with something playing in the background. I don’t actually have a stereo in the office at present, but I miss it and should do something about it.

Which came first the plot or the characters?

When I was writing one crummy novel after another, the plot or concept came first. From Dudley’s Fusiliers on to Yorktown and to now, the characters and their situations came first. That may actually have been the turning point for me, though I’ve never actually thought of it before.

Have you ever gotten stuck while writing a scene or chapter? How did you overcome it?

I get stuck all the time, but I’ve learned to trust my subconscious. I get up and walk away and hope the solution occurs to me later, when I’m doing something else. It always does, usually when I’m in the shower or some other place where I’m nowhere close to a piece of paper and something to write with.

What is the wackiest thing that’s ever happened to you since you started writing?

That’s an interesting question because wacky things have in fact happened. For a while there I kept running into other writers of historical adventure, writers more famous than I. Julian Stockwin, author of the Kydd series, walked into my office one day (not my writing office, my day job office). Bernard Cornwell has come to my home town for two book signings, and in both cases I was involved in the organization of the event. At the first one I was standing there in period costume, adding “colour,” when someone in the lineup looked at me and said, “Hey, you’re a writer too.” I actually looked behind me to see if he was talking to someone else, but he meant me. I’d done a couple of signings myself and he’d seen me before.

I think the king of wacky moments occurred in England, at the regimental museum of the Green Howards, an old British infantry regiment, in Richmond, North Yorkshire. I was on a tour of English Heritage sites with a Parks Canada group, and we were at a reception that was held in the museum. This was just after the first edition of Dudley’s Fusiliers had come out. I discovered a display case of items that had belonged to a Green Howards officer who had served in the Crimea and had later joined the US Army during the Civil War. This was exactly the plan I’d had for Dudley, and I was amazed to see that this real officer had lived a life so close to my fictional one. In my book, Dudley had captured a Russian helmet and overcoat, and there in the display case were those very things. I then turned around to see what was in the cases on the opposite wall, and there, hanging in front of me, was an original watercolour of the Green Howards on parade in 1852. This was the very painting that had been used as the cover art for the first edition of Dudley.

You also have several film credits; what abilities do films and writing have in common?

My first film credit was to write a short screenplay for a young director named Mike Fox. I’ve since written a few more screenplays, one which I then directed and produced as a no-budget feature. Films start with the writing, with the story and characters, which have to be just as well conceived as they do for a novel. However, in screenwriting you have to adhere to the principle of “show don’t tell” completely, because film is primarily a visual medium and every scene is dramatized. In prose you can dramatize key scenes, but a novel should not be all “show,” despite a trend toward that very thing. That’s not the point of prose. There’s still a place for straight narrative to move the story along, give it some sweep, and let us in on the thoughts of the characters.

Biography

Harold R. Thompson is from Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada. During regular business hours he works for Parks Canada, but for the rest of the time he writes. He also draws (cartoons, really) and dabbles in filmmaking. History, in particular military history, is his favourite subject. Though he has written non-fiction for periodicals such as Military Illustrated and Canada’s History, he is also the author of the For Empire and Honor series of novels, which star fictional Victorian hero William Dudley, an officer in the British Army. The first book in the series, Dudley’s Fusiliers, was released in 2010.

See more at: http://www.HaroldRossThompson.com

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Adventures in Sewing, Part I

Summer is here and school is out. My youngest daughter has always been interested in fashion and has decided that she would like to learn how to sew. Inspired by the woman in a certain cell phone commercial, she decided her first project would be a sun dress.
Since I was certain my avant guarde daughter would never sink to anything as provincial as the sundresses I imagined, I took her with me to the fabric store. Low and behold, it was a normal looking sundress, not some Victorian-esque, Gothic Lolita outfit I would have to order from Japan (And yes, that is usually the kind of things she wants).
Next, we journeyed to the fabric section and I made her read what kinds of fabric the pattern was suitable for and to pick a design that she liked. She said she wanted strawberries. Hmm. I flashed on black fabric with smooshed strawberries dripping blood red spots. But no. This was a sweet print with intact strawberries on a white and green background. After I picked myself up from the floor, I staggered over to the cutting counter and ordered up my 3 yards of fabric. The lady behind the counter was so excited that my daughter (who she thought was 9, but is actually 16) was learning to sew that she had to assist us picking out the notions.
Now, her first thought on the zipper was to pick out a red one to match the dominant color of the fabric, but knowing my daughter I asked if she wanted a green or white zipper to make it stand out (insert mini lecture on contrasting here). Sure enough, she wanted a green zipper so it would show.
Next was a show and tell exercise on fusible interfacing, thread and sewing machine and hand needles.
Of course, by the time all was rung up, I could have purchased the fully made dress from a store. The problem would have been finding it:-0.

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Confessions of an Introvert

I am by nature a hardwired introvert. In fact, I’m pretty sure I practice Extreme introvertion. I lived next to one neighbor for 5 years before I talked to her. She claims she tried multiple times to yell at me from her yard, and all I did was jump and run into the house.
I can’t deny that the episodes happened, but I don’t remember it. You see, I also have a tendency to retreat to the world I create inside my head and block out all but the most pressing actions around me. It was the challenge of bringing those worlds to life on the page that compells me to write.
But I digress.
Fully cognizant of my nature, I often force myself to step out of my comfort zone more. First, I decided to coordinate my chapter’s writing contest. Next, I began to inflitrate social media–I prefer facebook to Twitter, but I link my accounts so I can post on both. My latest project is to visit many blogs–this has the bonus of informing me, but I predominately do this to support my fellow writers, find out new things and hopefully add to my TBR pile. So when interview or guests blogs show up on the various lists belong to I try to stop by. This is not self promotion as I keep my comment about them, their books, writing or topic.
I am fairly comfortable doing all this things. It is when other people are involved in a face to face kind of way that I want to vomit or run screaming away. Usually at chapter meetings, I try to sit next to an unknown face and engage in conversation. Given my lack of practical social skills, this can degenerate into into an interogation:P, but I’m improving slowly with time and practice.
Alas, my improvement drive may have gotten me in a bit of hot water as for the Arizona Dreamin’ Romance Reader’s Conference I volunteered to not only host a table but give a intimate spiel to a group of 10 or so people on a rotating basis for an hour or so. Suffice it to say, I’ll be spending the next couple of days figuring out what I’m going too say.
Wish me luck!

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Memorial Day

I hope everyone enjoyed their Memorial Day weekend. After a long and busy weekend, I did take time out at 3PM today for the National Moment of Remembrance. For those who don’t know what that is, it is a moment to pause, reflect and respect those who have fallen in service to our country.
The beginnings of Memorial Day, or Decoration Day as it was originally called, began after the Civil War. There are differing views as to when and where it started. One says that Southern women began it to honor the Confederate dead. Other sources claim that freed black slaves began it to honor the Union solders who died in the Civil War. The first official celebration of Decoration Day was May 30, 1868 by the National Commander of the Grand Army of the Republic, General John Logan. Flowers were placed on both Union and Confederate graves at Arlington. Northern States quickly adopted the new day, but Southern states picked other days to honor their Rebel dead until after World War I.
Interestingly, the date was picked as no battle had been fought on the 30th of May. But in 1971, the day was changed to the last Monday in May to give government workers a 3 day holiday.
So where do the Poppies come in?
Poppies were first referenced in the poem In Flander’s Fields referring to the battles on French soil during World War I. An American woman, Moina Michael, penned a poem entitled We Shall Keep the Faith symbolizing the flower as the blood shed by valiant heroes on the field. She was the first to wear the red poppy on Memorial day and later sold the flowers to benefit servicemen in need. The tradition spread to many nations with the money going not just to veteran but including war orphans and widows.

So before today ends, think of those who died fighting for our country and maybe buy a poppy next time you see a VFW representative selling them.

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